Saturday, December 14, 2013

Article Critique #2- Collaborative Practices and Meaningful Physical Activity

Demonstrating How Collaborative Practices Contribute to Meaningful Physical Activity
Chessa Hedman
Brigham Young University

 Demonstrating How Collaborative Practices Contribute to Meaningful Physical Activity
            I read an article entitled, Demonstrating How Collaborative Practices Contribute to Meaningful Physical Activity.  I will begin by giving you a summary of the article.  I will then share my opinion of the strengths and weaknesses that the article had.  Following that, I will explain how the article can be used or applied and I will end by sharing my personal reaction and interests in the article.
Summary of the Article
            The article was a simple article that basically discussed the benefits that physical activity can have on a person.  The authors began by discussing what physical activity is.  They said, “Physical activity is an umbrella term that encompasses exercise, sport, and bodily movements produced by the skeletal muscles resulting from energy expenditure” (Groff & Zoerink, 2012, p. 243).  They then went on to discuss the outcomes that result from physical activity.  They talked about how it is a great thing that can help in many ways.  Some examples of ways it can help were, decreasing pain, lessening stress and anxiety, preventing physical falls, and lowering symptoms of depression.  The authors more specifically stated, “Further, participation in physical activity acts like a non-pharmacological therapy because it reduces the effects of many health problems” (Groff & Zoerink, 2012, p. 243).  Another topic discussed was how sports are a type of physical activity and sports can be played on both an individual and team basis.  Sports are a way to find personal satisfaction and self-confidence and playing team sports is a way to improve one’s social life.  They conducted a study by implementing physical activity on non-profit organizations serving persons with IDD, a state developmental disabilities agency, and a university health exercise and science program.  After the study they stated, “Pre- and post intervention assessments indicated statistically significant health improvements in total cholesterol and resting diastolic blood pressure; and fitness improvements in flexibility, muscular strength, and cardiovascular fitness” (Groff & Zoerink, 2012, p. 244).  They also implemented ten week physical activity and healthy nutrition in 9 sites across the United States and found that “Individuals with an above-normal Body Mass Index (BMI) significantly decreased BMI by the end of the program” (Groff & Zoerink, 2012, p. 244).  All in all, the article discussed what physical activity was and provided examples of how it can benefit people.
Strengths of the Article
            I found the article to be very interesting.  The title was very clear in telling the reader what exactly they were about to learn about.  The body of the article followed exactly what the title said.  It demonstrated how meaningful physical activity could be beneficial.  The authors did a great job providing not just one, but many examples and studies that they had conducted to prove how physical activity is beneficial for people.  As the reader, the article kept me interested the whole time.  It was not boring.  The authors stuck to the point without varying off topic.  With recreational therapy, there is obviously a lot of physical activity involved, so it was nice and interesting to see examples of how the physical activities we may do with our patients can and will benefit them.
Weaknesses of the Article
            Although the article was interesting, there were some weaknesses.  The first weakness was, I felt like the article was very short and could have been elaborated more.  It is good for authors to stick to the point, however, sometimes they leave out valuable information.  There were some good studies in the article, but the statistics were not always provided.  For example, as I mentioned earlier, the article talked about how with one of their studies, there was statistical significance that showed health improvements in multiple areas.  As the reader, after reading this, I would want to know exactly what those statistics are.  The article did not provide the reader with any sort of statistics, only statements.  It provided good information, but in my opinion, not specific or reliable enough information. 
How the Article can be used or applied
            If someone is interested in becoming more physically active, this is the article for you.  I know that there are many people out there who do not see the benefit in exercise.  They do not believe they need to exercise.  I would recommend this article to those people.  It can be used as a way to motivate people and help them understand how much physical activity can truly benefit their life.  It will not only tell them it will benefit their life, but it will teach them numerous ways that it benefits.  For example, they will be more physically fit, they will have better self-confidence, they will be healthier and happier, etc.  It is a motivating article for those seeking out information on physical activity. 
My personal reaction and interests in the Article
            Overall, I felt it was a valuable article.  It provided the reader with good information on the benefits of physical activity.  However, I do not feel like it greatly benefited me personally.  I am a person who already knows and believes in the benefits of physical activity.  I was more interested in learning specific statistics and how I can apply it more to therapeutic recreation.  I know there is a lot of physical activity involved in therapeutic recreation, but I do not feel that this article related the two.  Coming from a therapeutic recreation journal, that is more what I was expecting.  I do not feel like I will use this article for myself in the future, however I would recommend it to any friends or family who are struggling to see the benefits that physical activity can provide for them. 

References
Groff, D., & Zoerink, D.  (2012).  Demonstrating how collaborative practices contribute to meaningful physical activity.  Therapeutic Recreation Journal, 46(4), 243-244.






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